Sunday, 11 November 2012

Tim Finnegan by Polly Woklop



Halloween was Tim Finnegan's favourite time of year, he always

loved going trick or treating with his friends. He especially

loved it because he got lots of free sweets and chocolate. Most

kids didn’t like Tim because he was a bit of a bully and he stole

everyone’s sweet. Tim went from door to door and then he went

around again. After that he then went to all the other children

in the neighbourhood and made them give him their sweets.

Everybody in neighbourhood knew who Tim was and everybody

knew what he did, even the parents did not like him very much.

However this Halloween Bob had a plan to get back at Tim for all

the years of him stealing everyone’s sweets. Bob decided to get

revenge on Tim, and not the good kind of revenge. Bob waited

until it was very very very dark outside. Everybody was trick or

treating outside, they were all just hoping that Tim would not turn

up and take all their sweets from them. Bob was getting bored

of waiting for Tim to come and about to go home, when Tim came

around the corner with his friends.

Bob then put his plan into action. He jumped out from behind a

bush and he screamed ‘AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!’ Tim’s friends


got a massive fright when the saw Bob because he was dressed

up as the Joker from Batman and looked very creepy! All Tim’s

friends screamed and ran away from Bob. Tim was the only one

who didn’t run away. He could not recognise Bob because he was

dressed up and he had no idea who he was. ‘Who are you?’ Tim

asked. ‘I am going to get revenge! Mwahahahahaha!’ Bob replied.

Bob started to run at Tim while screaming as he ran. The next few

moments were a blur.

Tim died that night. Bob was arrested and brought to jail. Bob

didn’t care though, he was just happy he had gotten his revenge

on Tim and he had made an example of Tim to all the other bullies.

There was never any moe bullies in that neighbourhood ever again!

I always wonderend why…

By polly woklop

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